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Chapter 1

In this story Naruto, Gaara, Shikamaru, Kiba, Hinata  and Sakura are working for an Investigation, Sakura is Naruto's partner, Hinata is Gaara's partner and Kiba is Shikamaru's partner.  Tsunade is their boss. Kakashi is the head off their section. Sasuke is an criminal who is working for Akatsuki, the organisation where his big brother, Itachi Uchiha, is also working for. The boss off Akatsuki is Orochimaru.                                                            
This is all you have to know to understand this story.

Naruto's p.o.v.

"Naruto! I want you in my office now!" Kakashi yells. "yeah, yeah.. I'm coming." Naruto whines. They entering Kakashi's office. Naruto closes the door behind him and he takes place on the empty chair. "why did you let him escape?!" Kakashi says. "who are you talking about?" Naruto asks. "YOU KNOW WHO I'M TALKING ABOUT! GOD DAMNIT, NARUTO!" Kakashi yells, "I told you to keep your private life and your work separated! If you can't do that, I will get you off of this case."   "NO!! I can do this!!" Naruto says. "If you just make one mistake from here on, you will give me no choice, got that?" Kakashi asks. "Yeah, got it, sir." Naruto walks out of the office and closes the door behind him.  


"Damn! He's fast!" Naruto chases the guy who just shot someone. 'That's it! I'll cut him of at the next street!' Naruto thinks. At the crossing the guy goes straight forward  and Naruto goes left.

Unknown guy's p.o.v.

'huh? He doesn't following me anymore?' he thinks. Then he stops running and looks around him. 'I should go back to the headquarters'. He turns around to walk back. "now I've got you!" someone tackled him and forced him on the ground with his face down. The guy who was following him takes of his forage cap.

Naruto's p.o.v.

"Sasuke? Is that you?" Naruto asks. "huh?" Sasuke turns his head so he faces Naruto. "*gasp!* Na-Naruto?" Sasuke says. Naruto get off of Sasuke. "why? Why are you with the Akatsuki? Why? Tell me." Naruto says with his face down. "Sorry old pal." Sasuke says. "huh? For wha- ahhhh" Sasuke kicks Naruto in his stomach.  Naruto collapses to the ground.
"Naruto where are you?!" Sakura yells. Sasuke hears Sakura coming. "see you later, Naruto." Sasuke says and runs away.
"Naru-! Naruto! Are you okay?" Sakura runs towards Naruto who was still laying on the ground. "yeah.. physical." Naruto says. "what do you mean?" Sakura asks. "that guy I chased? That was Sasuke Uchiha." Naruto says.

*flashback ends*

Naruto's p.o.v.

"Naruto? Are you sure that it was Sasuke?" Sakura asks. "100%" Naruto says. Sakura looks down. "what's wrong Sakura? Do you still have feelings for him?" Naruto asks. Sakura nods. "I would have guessed that." Naruto walks to his bureau. "Sakura can you get me Sasuke's criminal record?" Naruto asks. Sakura nods again and walks away.        
"Need any help for your case Uzumaki?" Gaara walks in. "Have you solved your case, Gaara?" Naruto asks. "yeah… the son killed his dad. Not so surprised. But back to your case… you have The Akatsuki case, right?" Gaara says. "yeah… guess who I just run into?" Naruto says. "Tell me." Gaara says. "Sasuke Uchiha." Naruto says. "And you didn't arrest him?!" Gaara says irritated. "No… I was frozen. And then he kicked me. I couldn't do anything." Naruto turns his head away.
"He was your first friend, right? That most be hard for you." Gaara says.
"Yeah… And it's even harder for Sakura… She still have feelings for him." Naruto watches his computer screen. "here's Sasuke's criminal record." Sakura gives Naruto the file. "Can you collect all the information of the Akatsuki?" Naruto asks. "Yeah, but what do you want with Sasuke's file?" Sakura asks. "I want to check something………
I knew it! His criminal activity only started when he joined the Akatsuki. Maybe he's been forced to join them!" Naruto says. "And if he did it with an other reason?" Sakura says. "then we have to find that reason." Naruto says.  

"hey Sakura, do you remember what Sasuke said what was his goal?" Naruto asks. "ehm… he said: I want to destroy a certain person." Sakura says. "yeah.. and that person is Itachi Uchiha, right?" Naruto says. Sakura nods. "and Itachi is also working for the Akatsuki."  
"So? What's your point?" Sakura asks. "Sasuke wants to take revenge on his brother for killing his entire clan… that's why Sasuke joined the Akatsuki." Naruto says. Gaara looks at Sakura. "shall I help you to find all the information of the Akatsuki?" Gaara asks. "yeah, thank you Gaara." Sakura smiles and they walk away.

"H-hey Na-Naruto." Hinata walks in. "huh? O hey Hinata! I heard you and Gaara solved your case." Naruto stands up. "O yeah, D-Do you want to lunch t-together?" Hinata asks. "O yeah, sure. What do you want?" Naruto asks. "I t-thought a-about Ramen, if you like?" Hinata says. "Yeah! Come on! let's go!" Naruto takes Hinata's hand and runs out of the building.

Hinata's p.o.v.

"Mmmmm! It tastes good!" Naruto says. "Yeah, it's really great!" Hinata says. 'I didn't stutter! For the first time I didn't stutter in front of Naruto!' Hinata thinks. "Hinata? Hello? Are you there?" Naruto waves his hand in frond of Hinata's face. "Huh? O sorry Naruto, what d-did you say?" Hinata asks.  " I asked if you heard anything from the case of Shikamaru and Kiba." Naruto says. "O no, I heard nothing." Hinata says. "I think it's weird. Shikamaru solves his cases in less than a few weeks.  It's been 3 months. What do you think?" Naruto says. "Y-Yeah.. It is really weird for Shikamaru. D-do you think there's something wrong?" Hinata asks worried. "I hope not." Naruto says.

What do you think of chapter one? Please comment!
this is my first Fan Fiction that I wrote in English!
I'm not sure of this title for this and maybe I'm gonna change it... If you have any suggestions for the title please feel free to tell me!!

If I wrote something wrong please say it!

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StarRider24 May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! ^.^
YaoiTotoro Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it. Kinda reminds me of one of my stories. But I like how Naruto's having to chase Sasuke. It's like what he's doing in Shippuden.
StarRider24 Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really? Thank you!!
With one of your stories??
Because I like your stories!
I've read yaoi for a date, blackmail time, the nerd and the jock
YaoiTotoro Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you like my stories, but this one's a bit more serious than thoses two (not as funny). It's called Hidden Leaf. [link]

Sasuke's a spy and Naruto's a member of a gang who were both assigned to watch over the same person. Well, that person dies and they want to know why, but there bosses don't want them working with each other. So they pretend to be detectives and work together anyways.

Yeah, it's a bit more complex than yours.
StarRider24 Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is it that story that Naruto and Gaara had been kidnapped by the akatsuki???

Because what you told me souds familair...
YaoiTotoro Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Uh yeah it is. Take it you've read that one huh? ^^;
StarRider24 Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah.. But I think it was a while ago.. ^.^'
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